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Post by silverfrost on Mar 1, 2007 12:38:17 GMT -5
Current Name:Silverfrost Age:20 moons Clan: MistClan Gender: She-cat Rank: Deputy or Warrior Mentor/Apprentice: None Description:Silverfrost is a silver she cat with ice blue eyes. Her left paw and her belly are white. Personality:Silverfrost is an out going and very friendly she-cat. Silverfrost is really loyal and believes in peace and justice. Pic: None History: She was born on a half moon. That half moon a medicine cat died but the moon was silver and that is how she got the name silver. On the day of her warrior ceremony in leaf-bare the hole frost was frosty and got the name silverfrost
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 1, 2007 13:49:39 GMT -5
Please use Spell Check and write in third person. Example for third person: Moonstar walked down the alley, too cold to feel her paws. It was in the middle of leafbare and her Clan had to steal food from Twolegs. BAD Example: I walked down the alley, too cold to feel my paws. It is in the middle of leafbare and my Clan has to steal from the Twolegs.
Also, personality doesn't mean to tell how much she wants to get this duty, it's like 'Moonstar is sassy and sweet. She is always determined and loves a good talk'.
And I don't understand anything your trying to say in your History. Also, you can be Deputy of MistClan if you finish and get accepted before Flurrystorm gets accepted.
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Post by silverfrost on Mar 1, 2007 16:21:25 GMT -5
is that better(bowing down to the great leader of mistclan)
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 1, 2007 16:36:21 GMT -5
Yes, and I will accept it. But I need to conference now with Lilystar to make sure you are going to be the best Deputy I can have.
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Post by silverfrost on Mar 1, 2007 16:43:34 GMT -5
yes moonstar
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Post by {C.anary} on Mar 2, 2007 7:56:52 GMT -5
I think she'd make a great deputy if you do Moonstar. ;D
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 2, 2007 16:34:10 GMT -5
ok. But I have to see what Flurrystorm's turns out. If hers is better, no offense, then she gets to be Deputy. Is that ok, Silverfrost? And is it ok with you too, Lilystar?
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Post by silverfrost on Mar 2, 2007 20:37:24 GMT -5
it is ok with me (dowing down)
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 4, 2007 12:10:50 GMT -5
You don't have to bow down when we're not in RP mode...
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Post by {C.anary} on Mar 7, 2007 7:56:41 GMT -5
lol,fine with me!I'll check out Flurrystorm's bio.
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